Minor Review by Andrew Barroso
This page is brought to you by the Neumors foundation its copywritten from 1995-2005. The information found in kid’s health is a great website for people who don’t have much time to read through lengthy pages. It is very generalized and straight to the point. It is also great because it gives little side tabs that you can click for further information. The side tabs include related articles which give you information on what goes on the operating room and other throat malfunctions such as enlarged adenoids, and additional resources that include information on sleep apnea that is sometimes caused by tonsils. The page is simple enough for kids to understand yet knowledgeable enough to put parents at ease if there child is going to have a tonsillectomy. Having my tonsils removed I have personal experience and I know that the information sated on this page is true. The only down fall to this web page is that it doesn’t offer many pictures to view. I think parents should be able to see what exactly happens during a tonsillectomy so they wouldn't have to worry as much and can see what goes on. http://kidshealth.org/PageManager.jsp?dn=KidsHealth&lic=1&article_set=21814&cat_id=138&&ps=106

1 Comments:
Andrew, nice job. You do a great job of telling us who posted the website and describing its feature.
I wish you would add one paragraph in the middle that expands with a description of the information that is actually here. What can we find out on some of those side tapbs about throat malfunctions or enlarged adenoids?
Then you close with a good measured opinion of the website. NIce job,
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